![]() ![]() ![]() "Unlike the attacker and defender monsters, you can freely remove the supporter monster from the battlefield on your turn and replace it with another supporter. "The supporter monsters' support attribute has a number on it that can be used to activate the monster effect on either players turn." (I'm not so sure about "either players turn" phrase, it sounds strange to me but I can't think of another wording) The supporters will always have an effect (there's something missing here)" "The supporter monsters are used to help your other monsters or make trouble for the opponent. "The attacker monsters are used to deal damage and strike at the opponent, without attacker monsters you cannot harm anything, including the opponent's planet." The effect will remain active until the monster is removed from the battlefield." The other effect is passive and will automatically activate when you play the defender. "Some Defenders come with 2 types of effect abilities, one is the active ability which is activated when you choose to defend and use a shield. I broke your sentences into shorter ones to make them clearer. Your opponent can attack your back row if you choose not to defend that turn." ![]() After that your opponent is free to attack other monsters or the defender monster until it is killed. Once you use up all the shields your defender's health is exposed and you cannot defend with that monster. The number on it represents how many times you can defend. "The defender monsters comes with a shield Attribute. "The Defender monsters helps you protect your planet and monsters, without a defender monster on the battlefield, the opponent is free to attack your other monsters." I don't know if there's any rule in English about word repetition but to me it sound strange, I think it's better to use synonyms:." At the start of your turn you receive 1 resource token in the form of a star (coins is a good substitute)" Since you're using the second person during the rest of the book it's better to have all the text in the same style. Here the sentence starts talking about players and then you move to a second person."The battlefield is made up of card zones, which you are required to use during game play" Battle other planet decks and exploit their weaknesses to emerge victorious." "It is your job to choose a planet deck to represent. "some Minimon enjoy the taste of death while others just fight to survive." I'm trying to simplify some sentences like:.Left alignment is much more comfortable to read.Įnglish is not my native tongue so I'll help with what I can. Avoid using centre alignment for long paragraphs. ![]()
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